roughcut feedback

'very good, needs more fitting music.'
'i liked it, it's very accurate, kept to exactly how i remember the storyboard.'
'the best one i've seen so far.'
'poor continuous editing.'
'the music fits well with the piece.'
'need to see more of the mystery man.'
'some good shots, need to see more of the mystery man.'

from these comments, we are going to change what we've got so far to meet the expectations of the class. but all in all we thought that we received some good, encouraging comments from the rest of the class.